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Edit: Oh, there's a process too! [link]
D: My pictures are getting steadily creepier!

Based on/Inspired by the scary but fantastic poem by Maurice Odgen.

Linework is here: [link]
With some fancy value levelling I managed to remove the blue lines. Phew!
Credits:Clouds - [link]
P.S. Yes, I know what a gallows-tree is. This is just the image in my head =P

The Hangman

By Maurice Ogden

Into our town the hangman came,
smelling of gold and blood and flame.
He paced our bricks with a different air,
and built his frame on the courthouse square.

The scaffold stood by the courthouse side,
only as wide as the door was wide
with a frame as tall, or a little more,
than the capping sill of the courthouse door.

And we wondered whenever we had the time,
Who the criminal? What the crime
the hangman judged with the yellow twist
of knotted hemp in his busy fist.

And innocent though we were: with dread
we passed those eyes of buckshot lead.
Till one cried, "Hangman, who is he,
for whom you raise the gallows-tree?"

Then a twinkle grew in his buckshot eye
and he gave us a riddle instead of reply.
"He who serves me best," said he
"Shall earn the rope on the gallows-tree."

And he stepped down and laid his hand
on a man who came from another land.
And we breathed again: for another's grief
at the hangmans hand was our relief.

And the gallows frame on the courthouse lawn
by tomorrow's sun would be struck and gone.
So we gave him way and no one spoke
out of respect for his hangman's cloak.

The next day's sun looked mildly down
on roof and street in our quiet town;
and stark and black in the morning air
the gallows-tree on the courthouse square.

And the hangman stood at his usual stand
with the yellow hemp in his busy hand.
With his buckshot eye and his jaw like a pike,
and his air so knowing and business-like.

And we cried, "Hangman, have you not done,
yesterday with the alien one?"
Then we fell silent and stood amazed.
"Oh, not for him was the gallows raised."

He laughed a laugh as he looked at us,
"Do you think I've gone to all this fuss,
To hang one man? That's the thing I do
To stretch the rope when the rope is new."

Above our silence a voice cried "Shame!"
and into our midst the hangman came;
to that man's place, "Do you hold," said he,
"With him that was meant for the gallows-tree?"

He laid his hand on that one's arm
and we shrank back in quick alarm.
We gave him way, and no one spoke,
out of fear of his hangman's cloak.

That night we saw with dread surprise
the hangman's scaffold had grown in size.
Fed by the blood beneath the chute,
the gallows-tree had taken root.

Now as wide, or a little more
than the steps that led to the courthouse door.
As tall as the writing, or nearly as tall,
half way up on the courthouse wall.

The third he took, we had all heard tell,
was a usurer, an infidel.
And "What," said the Hangman, "Have you to do
with the gallows-bound, and he a Jew?"

And we cried out, "Is this one he
who has served you well and faithfully?"
The Hangman smiled, "It's a clever scheme
to try the strength of the gallows beam."

The fourth man's dark accusing song
had scratched our comfort hard and long.
"And what concern," he gave us back,
"Have you for the doomed - the doomed and black?"

The fifth, the sixth, and we cried again,
"Hangman, Hangman, is this the man?"
"It's a trick", said he, "that we hangmen know
for easing the trap when the trap springs slow."

And so we ceased and asked no more
as the hangman tallied his bloody score.
And sun by sun, and night by night
the gallows grew to monstrous height.

The wings of the scaffold opened wide
'til they covered the square from side to side.
And the monster crossbeam looking down,
cast its shadow across the town.

Then through the town the hangman came
and called through the empy streets... my name.
I looked at the gallows soaring tall
and thought, "There's no one left at all

for hanging, and so he calls to me
to help take down the gallows-tree."
And I went out with right good hope
to the Hangman's tree and the Hangman's rope.

He smiled at me as I came down
to the courthouse square, through the silent town.
Supple and stretched in his busy hand,
was the yellow twist of hempen strand.

He whistled his tune as he tried the trap
and it sprang down with a ready snap.
Then with a smile of awful command,
He laid his hand upon my hand.

"You tricked me, Hangman," I shouted then,
"That your scaffold was built for other men,
and I no henchman of yours," I cried,
"You lied to me, Hangman, foully lied."

Then a twinkle grew in his buckshot eye,
"Lied to you...tricked you?" He said "Not I...
for I answered straight and told you true.
The scaffold was raised for none but you."

"For who has served more faithfully
than you with your coward's hope?" said he,
"And where are the others that might have stood
side by your side, in the common good?"

"Dead!" I answered, and amiably
"Murdered," the Hangman corrected me.
"First the alien, then the Jew...
I did no more than you let me do."

Beneath the beam that blocked the sky
none had stood so alone as I.
The Hangman then strapped me, with no voice there
to cry "Stay!" for me in the empty square.
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:iconowlcrew:
Nice picture, Nice song ...
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:icontztokflup:
Thanks! The poem is by Maurice Ogden.
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:iconsteelfanged:
Wow! just, wow! That poem was amazing! And the picture fit so well with my imagination!
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:icontztokflup:
Glad you liked it, thanks for the fave!
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:icon3fangs:
Whhhooooaaa....O_O

I LIKED it! The dark picture, the poem...I had never read that one before--it was great! It was so...dark and macabre, but it had a moral there. Man, that was neat.

And the picture fits it perfectly! I mean, man, that's just so...wow. :omg:
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:icontztokflup:
It really makes a picture in one's head, that poem... *gazes into middle distance*

Thanks for your input, and fave :D I'm glad the picture matched what you imagined.
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:icon3fangs:
It was awesome in a dark and wonderful way.
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:iconjnels:
Hmm, this is good, but I'm still partial to the black-and-white one. It just seemed to fit in tone with the poem better.

And that poem...wow, I can't believe I'd never heard of it before. It was utter brilliance. And I can definitely see its cautionary macabre senses ruling over your piece here. It really is the sort of thing to give me shivers as I consider the dark truths inherent in the work.
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:icontztokflup:
Yeah, I think it lost something in the switch to colour... I've uploaded linework-only here [link] but it's lost some of the nice soft shading and texture the original has in the value-levelling process. Oh well...

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! It is a shiver-inducing story well told. I'd never heard of it either until it popped up in a school textbook focusing on the Holocaust (which makes sense.)
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:iconthejenjineer:
This is pretty cool. Great colors and a very eerie atmosphere. My favorite part has to be those tree trunks though, nothing says creepy like twisting trees! :)
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